For Rosa, Rosa Parks started a revolution, It was as if an evolution. They started a boycott just for her, She was a leader and a teacher. They marched with a zero, Who is now a hero. Martin Luther king jr.
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I think that it's really cool that you would right that about Rosa parks the only thing i didn't like was the end it dose not end really smooth but thats to me so
I agree that you could work on the end of the poem, but I do like the transition from Rosa Parks to Martin Luther King Jr. I like the idea of connecting these to great historical figures. Rosa Parks helped to start a movement, and King Jr. lead the movement to change.
This was a nice poem, you got some good flow. That was a nice transition between Rosa Parks and Martin Luther King Jr. excellent work!! The ending kinda dose need some more work, but it is hella good!!
"Pride of lions in the yard. Stare, and they burn a hole in your retina. A common flower, a weed that no one sees, yes. But for us, a noble thing, the dandelion.” ~Ray Bradbury, Dandelion Wine
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I think that it's really cool that you would right that about Rosa parks the only thing i didn't like was the end it dose not end really smooth but thats to me so
by: MW
I agree that you could work on the end of the poem, but I do like the transition from Rosa Parks to Martin Luther King Jr. I like the idea of connecting these to great historical figures. Rosa Parks helped to start a movement, and King Jr. lead the movement to change.
Matthew
This was a nice poem, you got some good flow. That was a nice transition between Rosa Parks and Martin Luther King Jr. excellent work!! The ending kinda dose need some more work, but it is hella good!!
-NIKOLE-
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