In the end
By me ( Courtney)
I fear what I never had
I cry when I have no tears
Alone is how I feel each day
When life is all I despise
And cold is all I feel
It’s hard to wake up to sleep again
Dreams where I finally feel free
With my heart smashed and hurting
I wonder why I live
Rain seems to be my friend
Snow is my protector
With all my thoughts
I am alone with pain
With only hope of it ending
I live to see another day
In the end the pain may be great
But meeting you has changed my life
"Pride of lions in the yard. Stare, and they burn a hole in your retina. A common flower, a weed that no one sees, yes. But for us, a noble thing, the dandelion.”
~Ray Bradbury, Dandelion Wine
~Ray Bradbury, Dandelion Wine
5 comments:
this was really good though i am sick of poems hat make me cry,because my mascara is not waterproof and i am going to get raccoon eyes and it will be all your fault but good pome
your not alone I'm here and I'm a super hero to take the pain away.
hey kid you got some strong emotions going with this work. if you ever need to talk i'm here k.
-cas-
I like the ending. You made me depressed and buried me in despair. Then, out of nowhere, the end brought hope.
Matthew
I like it! You express a lot of emotion in this. I like how its depressing through the whole thing then at the end, you see the light! Your awsome courtney! Keep writing those great poems.
-NIKOLE-
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