Friday, April 11, 2008

Counter Clockwise

Counter Clockwise

Hollow, is how to fit inside
Frittered and cracked,
Solid roots and dead rocks collide
Soil slow, wet, and compact,
No orders were given, not a sigh
Higher and wider it stacked,
So hallow and quite, a perfect haven to hide,
come back.


Elden

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

this is a kool pome. i like how every thing fits in together.
cas

Lesli said...

Elden,

This is amazing! I had to read it several times to get the full meaning. You must have an "old soul."

Lesli

Anonymous said...

i like that. its cool.


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