Phoenix
The phoenix is a sign
A sign of new life
A sign of rebirth
Eternal life
All these things have some thing in common
They all deal with life and death
Which is a serious matter
Your life may seem very insignificant
But
It is your life, and your decision may change the world
The phoenix is a sign
A sign of new life
A sign of rebirth
Eternal life
All these things have some thing in common
They all deal with life and death
Which is a serious matter
Your life may seem very insignificant
But
It is your life, and your decision may change the world
5 comments:
I like the varied length of lines within your poem. It adds variety to the pacing of your poem. The but is also appropriatly placed. It leaves the reader anticipating what will come next.
-Matthew
This poem reminds me of harry potter if that makes sense. Good job and good times. From Regan
This Is your best one so far dude! good job man.
_Elden
very good job Phoenix.
Charles.
that vary comming like vary decision
by brent j
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