Reagan- okay so this poem speaks alot about how you feel about her. reach out for her hand and realize your not alone for she is still in your heart _Courtney
"Pride of lions in the yard. Stare, and they burn a hole in your retina. A common flower, a weed that no one sees, yes. But for us, a noble thing, the dandelion.” ~Ray Bradbury, Dandelion Wine
6 comments:
this is an awesome poem i like how you used the rhyming in the last two lines. and I can also relate to this poem because of my past.
phoenix
Reagan-
okay so this poem speaks alot about how you feel about her. reach out for her hand and realize your not alone for she is still in your heart
_Courtney
this poem was interesting because in few sentences you said so much. the emotion in it is amazing . very good
With the title and the description, I feel like I can feel what you are describing.
Lesli
thats cool i really like it man so keep it up
-Mark
Composing a haiku with rhyme shows the talent of a true poet.
Matthew
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